好久没写过这悲哀的东西了
这是表达一位君子想念与爱一个没有结果的姑娘
除了这以外,这君子也觉得他却没有一个美好的友谊在身边
我也蛮久没写过这7字诗歌了
所谓的7字诗歌呢?
你可看清楚全部都是7字成一行的
我知我华文一直以来都不太好
我只是写写玩玩而已 如没兴趣请下次再来吧
谢谢 你的到来
7字诗歌- 回乡之歌
独自徘徊草堆上 唱首情歌谁欣赏
耳边鸟儿悲惨叫 蝴蝶乱飞成舞蹈
乌云满天在头飘 抬头没见星月光
千日思量再思想 万月思想情忧伤
越思越想越心伤 早日回乡见爹娘
风花雪月梦一场 许多青春好时光
眼前遥望见牛郎 七夕织女走仙桥
浪子爱情却无望 友情永不会美满
海外一事无所成 未来老大土悲伤
浪子是时回家乡 爹娘喜爱依门望
问儿何时会归乡 同桌吃饭谈天亮
闭眼再听游子吟 无时回想她摸样
独自走向沙滩上 梦见心爱的姑娘
风吹海浪心感伤 她心到底在谁上
让我日月费心爱 盼望太阳西边上
日出黄昏见月光 昨日开心今日忘
月食吞吃我声响 都是早日回家乡
风雨打在我身上 回想心中的姑娘
心事没人来顾问 只会将我取话笑
开心总会有悲伤 潇洒把酒灌以忘
真正快乐我不是 笑容只是我假象
浪子回乡见爹娘 留下无穷的时光
健儿版权所有
可是大家都是阿智
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我終於看了六弄
說起來用上“終於”有點太用力,也只是剛好看了這部電影而已
我寫的很慢...很慢... 想要精準點的把每個文字盡量貼近情緒多點
畢竟最近開始,我覺得好多情感都流逝的,有點太快
流逝了,字面上的意思
和有些好友說起這點,其實我好像沒什麼多餘的情感了
嘛
說說六弄
我沒在寫觀後感,這只是...
8 years ago
7 comments:
actually i very interested in ur love story de, but this kinda thing always will b the most sensitive matter for each guy..
welcome to share de, n hey, ur mandarin quite fluence la, don b too modest.. hav fun in ur NS lo bro
love matters? cheers la! don be down.. know u miss my lengzai face la.. don miss me so much.. enjoy ur days 1st.. :P
hey, wat happen?
y u never share ur problem with us?
pls don keep everything in ur heart k? come back kl, we go jalan jalan, don think sad things jor....
hey bro! wat happen?..
it been 3 weeks u went back to hometown n v didnt meet up jo.. but i still haven know wat happen n hw u doin recently.. i know u like to keep everything in heart but do share with me! i will alwaz there to help n try to listen ur story bro!!..
i know u really headache with those SHIT stuff but try to relax urself..
at least u tell us hw u doin now n NOT jz silence there!..
haiz.. i know i says anything oso cant help u.. i jz can wish u luck and god bless u!..
haha .. no love story at all la , just write write song only ..
thx you all concern , i ntg , i am ok ar , hihi.. muazk u all .....
dunwan write so deep , but i also can get abit meaning inside ..... follow ur heart to do d thing !! take care bro !!!
haha ..geng wor , know have special inside meaning tim .. hihi ^^ thx bro.. u take care too
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